COOLPIX

Concentration 2

this is the second piece in my concentration, it has yet to be given a permanate title. in this piece i wanted to demonstrate touch. Did i succeed? not quite. i do like the composition but in its entirety but there certain things that i would have liked to have changed. for example i would liked to have made the object the hand is touching more readable, more

identifiable. in addition to that i would have wanted to create balance by adding more flow lines on both sides of the hand and arm. aside from those thing i like the color harmony, and the area of intensity in the upper portion of the composition. i did a good job.